After receiving some feedback I decided to change what I believed needed t be changed in order for it to look more professional and overall better.
As you can see I have made it follow more of the house style from the Magazine advert and made sure that all of the important dates and information are highlighted in a clear and professional looking manor. I have also made it so that there is more that connotes towards the target audience such as the barbed wire and the fire behind the logo as if to show that it is freshly molded steel.
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